Monday, November 23, 2015

Comments for Tim and Paul: Bill Gates

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8 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed how you gave some background knowledge on Bill Gates. The only negative thing that I saw was that you looked a little nervous but that is understandable. Other than that it was really good!

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  2. The Presentation was really good and thought out. Also very interesting. I loved how you had the good the bad and the ugly of the project in what Bill Gates stand for. Out standing Job!
    The only thing you can work on is looking at the people you are speaking too but other then that very good job.

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  3. The Presentation was really good and thought out. Also very interesting. I loved how you had the good the bad and the ugly of the project in what Bill Gates stand for. Out standing Job!
    The only thing you can work on is looking at the people you are speaking too but other then that very good job.

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  4. Your presentation was very informational, I learned a lot about Bill Gates influence into society. You guys were very knowledgeable about your topic. A negative aspect of your presentation was there was a lot going on in your slides, to many pictures, and not enough prompts.

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  5. I learned so much from your presentation. I honestly did not know much on Bill Gates. I like how you really showed what he does with his money, how much his networth is. The only downside I would say is you could work on being more active with the audience. Like looking at people more.

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  6. Positive was that you guys had a strong presentation a good balance of info and personal info about Bill Gates.
    Negative was you were kind of reading straight from the slides as you were presenting

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  7. I really liked how you started off by telling us facts about Bill Gates. Very interesting points! I also like the handout that was handed out to the class. On the other hand though, I think that you should of had more words on the slides. On some slides there were to many pictures used.

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  8. Great job! Lots of great facts ! I could really tell you guys put a lot of thought and research into your presentation, the only negative I could possible think of is the long length of the presentation. Really great job!

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