Monday, November 23, 2015

Comments for Hans and Zach: Johnny Appleseed

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

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9 comments:

  1. One positive thing that I saw within your presentation was that you really projected your voices. A negative thing that I saw was that your power point was all words.

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  2. You two had a great relaxed feel during the presentation I really liked it!!!
    Some more visual effects would be nice to add to the presentation, other than that great Job!

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  3. Good Job

    one thing I liked from your Presentations was the fact that you guys spoke loud and were talking to everyone.
    One negative thing is all your slides were words and wish you would have had less words. but besides that you seemed to know your facts.

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  4. Good Job

    one thing I liked from your Presentations was the fact that you guys spoke loud and were talking to everyone.
    One negative thing is all your slides were words and wish you would have had less words. but besides that you seemed to know your facts.

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  5. Your presentation was good and well thought out. You guys had a lot of information on your topic. A negative thing I saw was you guys did not have a handout and it would have made it easier to follow your presentation.

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  7. I think your presentation had a great theme of red! I really liked how you organized your slides. I learned things about him I had never known and you really got the point about how down to earth he really was. I think a negative thing is some of the slides you seemed to not know as much and were at a loss for what to say. Some of your slides had a lot of words.

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  8. I like how your slides were organized. You had lots of great point about Johnny! On the other hand though, you didn't have a hand out for the class which would of made it easier for us to follow with your presentation.

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  9. Great information and facts within your slides ! I think describing the slides a little more would have helped a lot! Also, more pictures ! I think a visual aid is crucial for an audience ! Great job :)

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