First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.
450 million copies sold!! that is amazing!!! I like that you had a the good feel for how Rowling really started to open people's imagination. I loved that she was able to loose her billionaire status to help other people! More time on slide would be better! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really like how she went by a different name for the other books she has wrote. I think that's super cool that she hid her self but still was writing. The only thing I wish you guys would have done was went over the slides before the Presentations, on some slides you seemed to be lost in thought or not knowing what to say. but other then that good job.
ReplyDeleteI like how you guys knew what information you were talking about. You guys knew your subject, good research. The negative comment I have for you is you could have had another impact into society.
ReplyDeleteI learned that her books beat LOTR by a lot in terms of copies sold. I really liked how into it you were. What I got from it was both of you had read her books which made it easier for you to have the connection of have inspirational she is. There were some slides I think you could have expanded more on, like the negative impacts.
ReplyDeleteI liked the fact that you were able to find the fact that she used a pen name on some of the books she wrote and how she finally told the world she truly wrote the books. Negative I feel as if there wasn't enough about her personal life and what really made her want to start writing books
ReplyDeleteI thought it was interesting how she went by a different name on her books that she had written. Very different! On the other hand though I think that you should of explained the negative impacts a little bit more then you did.
ReplyDeleteI learned a lot from your presentation ! Cool facts ! I really think more projection from your voices would have helped engage the audience and would have helped display your great facts a little better ! :) Great job!
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