First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.
I really enjoyed how you gave the full story of Jackie Robinson. I also enjoyed all of the facts that Cameron gave about Jackie Robinson. The only negative thing that I saw was that there wasn't that many pictures and you read directly from the slides.
ReplyDeleteI liked your relaxed feel and delivery of the presentation! I also really liked the video you had and the narration you gave along with it!I It really hit all the senses and was very effective. Work on spending more time on slides, great job!!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the aspect of the story on Jackie. He is a inspired so many people to go do great things. The only thing i wish you guys would have done was not read so much from the slides. All your words were on the slides. But at the end you guys did a nice job but talking from the heart on somethings
ReplyDeleteI like how you guys had a video of him playing the game, and you guys added comments through the video. One thing you guys could improve on was spacing out your ideas, and keeping them consistent.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the hand out you had. I thought that was great and we got most of the important parts. Putting the video in was great, and you talked while it was going on which helped explain. I think you could have worked more on you slides put maybe some more in. There were some parts I think you didn't have a lot of information on.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the handout was great! I like how it talks about who Jackie Robinson is and how he influences the youth. I also like how you used a quote in the pamphlet. Also, I think you should have had a few more slides then just the ones you had.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your creativity with the handout! You two also had a lot of goof facts about Jackie Robinson. I thought you guys could have possibly added more slides and broken up the facts a little better, to better keep your audience engaged. Good job!
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