First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.
I thought you two did a great job with the background and really showing her humble background. It showed the inspiring see to things and how she was a role model to so many girls. She sets the stage that anyone can make it in the world. Great use of pictures! and the video added a lot to the presentation!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you pointed out she is always a victim! so true!!!
I really enjoyed how you told her whole story from county to pop star. The only negative thing that I saw was that you could of used some more pictures in your power point.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was well put together, you knew your information. I like how you showed her progression through the music industry. If you were to change one thing in your presentation, it would be adding more criticism from the music industry and narrow in on a topic it was very broad.
ReplyDeleteI liked all the information you had on her and well I am not exactly a Taylor Swift fan. i liked how you pointed out in the negative sides that she is always the victim in her songs. I think putting the song into the slides was a good idea too!
ReplyDeleteLiked all the information you gave on Taylor Swift especially about how young she was when she originally wrote lucky you.
ReplyDeleteThe negative impact was presentation seemed a little short
I really thought you guys did a great job talking about who Taylor Swift is, and what she sings about. I liked how you talked about how she was a victim in her songs sometimes. On the other hand, I think that your presentation should of had more to it. Like more words on the slides and visuals.
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